I got someone else to evaluate my cover by answering some questions.
By reading through the answers that were given it is clear that I was correct about the colour scheme issue and that I should be using different colours which do not blend in with the background so much. I also included in the strap line about a 'teacher's love affair' which I meant o add in to add some humour, but in the peer assessment they mentioned it is not relevant to my target market as this is not the time in their life to be worrying about that. They also mentioned my pug, that I didn't make it bold enough, in my music magazine I will be sure to remember this and adapt it accordingly.
They complimented my house theme, I apprentice this as it is also something that i thought i did well, them agreeing shows i succeeded in this part of my task. On top of that my buzz words and puffs were also commended, i feel like these are good things to compliment as they are the most eye catching parts of a magazine cover, all the downfalls are smaller things that can be easily changed.
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